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Cat tails gather near the water's edge
Huddling knee deep in sunken pools
Mosquitos shake excitedly with disease
Blue gill flinch; a golden eagle power dives....

Success struggles against deepening talons
A quivering heartbeat bursts.



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On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (299) writes:
powerful write


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Mab (1038) writes:
powerful imagery..you capture nature so poignantly in only a handful of lines.


On Thursday September 13th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:
This was beautifully worded with an equal amount imagination thrown in for an elegant taste! Wonderful Write!


On Friday May 26th, 2006, Zen (634) writes:
i wish i could kiss the sun of only it wouldnt burn my lips off


On Wednesday March 22nd, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:
Yummy


On Tuesday January 3rd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
my word, this is fantastic..so brief and fervently weaved, and in snowflake elegance. i could go on and on about how beautiful this is.


On Friday December 16th, 2005, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
*bows* this allows me to see the images in my mind there is no longer 5in of snow but lush grass and summer heat a setting perfect for the last two lines to be set in. great job


On Friday December 16th, 2005, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
whoo hoo first comment



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