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"Silver Dharma Moon" by johntaiyu

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They don't like these zen poems
near as much
as the ones
about sex or drinking.

I get lots of kudos for those,
but these here
where open hearts and mist
is about all that happens
just don't seem
to get people's attention.

I should try a car chase
through fields of pompous grass
under the silver dharma moon

It'd never end.


© 2007 johntaiyu

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On Tuesday November 6th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:
kudos!


On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Zen (634) writes:
i like them. theyre my favorite =(


On Tuesday June 26th, 2007, saintedmad (1142) writes:
maybe that kind of attention you just dont really need; false accolades reaped under pseudolines; write of you and all will fall as it should; i enjoyed this open honest piece....without strings or showyness..... .


On Tuesday June 26th, 2007, Esau (282) writes:
k, i think i see where you're coming from. no one stops to smell the roses anymore, we only look for computer graphics. we need diamonds when glitter should be enough. i almost blew this off, but i'm glad i didn't.


On Tuesday June 26th, 2007, elisa (2025) writes:
'....I should try a car chase through fields of pompous grass...' ...or come on the peak of a voluminous mountain...... haha.... i completely understand where you're coming from... and i couldn't agree more... very well said.


On Tuesday June 26th, 2007, Guillotine (231) writes:
intriguing. I enjoy these writes immensely though, their slow-paced, insightful ponderings speak to me a lot more than the usual writes that seem to litter DP these days.


On Monday June 25th, 2007, capt_funguy (1000) writes:
who are .."they" ?


On Monday June 25th, 2007, Err0r (581) writes:
I know what you mean. I respect a person however who stays focused and doesn't die out for attention. Very Karmalicious write.



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