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"*drowning in daisies" by Sketso

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Memories float freely like pollen
trying to impregnate forgotten blooms
and I'm stuck on a path between gardens
trying to choose between freedom and you.



...and lying beneath it all,
I view each one;
bright daggers lancing my eyes
with visions of both yesterday and tomorrow,
while two smaller sets of footprints
trod daily upon my soul.
Twin blazing beacons that bring a warmth
that never seems to fully conquer
the wandering mind of the insane...

I'm broken by secret shame
as I return to my attempts to escape...

the very trap I built for myself.




A million bright daisies are screaming,
echoing this sweet torment of pain...
Could somehow that million be silenced
if I decided to cut off the rain?



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On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (690) writes:
your words have a way of wrapping my mind around reality in subtle shades of grey, very nice -symph-


On Friday May 30th, 2008, Narcissa (735) writes:
If you stop the rain the sweet will suffer with the pain...there has to be both. Plus I planted English daisies last week for the first time...So don't do anything foolish like that!


On Friday May 30th, 2008, Velvet_Raventon (703) writes:
I really liked it, thank you. ~V.


On Friday May 30th, 2008, SpiritofShiobhan (43) writes:
Hmmm..human behaviour so beautifully illustrated through words.


On Friday May 30th, 2008, Bridge (354) writes:
this made me smile, but not for the content. it's because i rememebered that comment that you left me about daisies and how you always seem to kill them in your works. lol. i have a weird sense of humor. >


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, tangeled (541) writes:
your words always entrance me. this was very well done with awesome imagery. a pleasure to read. ~ta~


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (396) writes:
You and your daisies... I love it! As always


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, Pureheartless (39) writes:
the last lines seemed to have a change of view, like you switched from what would happen to you to what would happen to them. nice write though. :) -jake



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