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*daisy down: a breaking point

jagged ivory
midst the mouth of eruption;
scarlet fields of glory
in shattered azure dreams.

Your words hit like a ton of lead

...thus I quit.

crabgrass doesn't deserve a new pot;
just scatter me amongst the daisies.

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On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (583) writes:

painful, brillinat, as always -symph-

On Saturday May 31st, 2008, Narcissa (681) writes:

I love the last line too...hanging out in the daisies isn't a bad place to be...

On Friday May 30th, 2008, RubyXero (454) writes:

nice. very nice. loved the first stanza and...well the whole thing actually. :)

On Friday May 30th, 2008, BetterOffDeadMoon (566) writes:

/crabgrass doesn't deserve a new pot; just scatter me among the daisies./ this line rings to me. i love it

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