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The Hollow

You and your hollow heart
Your empty love
Your undying....nothing
You and your Hollow Heart
With its empty care
Empty stare
Empty...
That's what you are
That's what you give me
Nothing
Emptiness
Hollow love
You don't give a shit
So why do you fucking ask
Why do you pretend you're there
You're not there
You're hollow
Empty
Nothing
Stare
You
Don't
Care

© Natalie Wells 05/07/07

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On Saturday September 8th, 2007, Sketso (534) writes:

I have to ask... every reader... have you been here? Why is it so easy to be both victim and victor in this? I could be the only one? This one hurts me on both sides of the spectrum... but it's brilliant nonetheless.

On Thursday July 12th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:

these people are idiots, and you suck

On Sunday August 19th, 2007, Sharon Rose (658) writes:

wow, and I thought I fucking hated you in the chat...if you're going to criticize, the least you could do is make it constructive, you uninformed egotist..

On Tuesday August 28th, 2007, MindRape (872) writes:

hehe down kitty you know me better than this ;) and you know i fear no man's judement.....or envy >;) of me

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Err0r (570) writes:

Why doesn't this have more comments? This is cleverly structured. I enjoyed every bit of it.

On Thursday May 10th, 2007, Ainsof (1831) writes:

and in the emptiness we often find that which draws us near... is it not often the absence that makes what is what it is... to be hollow may be to be like a vase... ready to give and receive... and then, maybe not.. murmur... murmur

On Thursday May 10th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:

This can be taken an assortment of ways and so it slighly unclear; however, it has strength in being precise and right to the, lack-of-heart, of the metter. I hope either you being to feel or you leave the guy. ~T

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