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sixsixnine candles(Dedication to "sixsixnine")

My Poem In Tribute to sixsixnine!

blinded by the light
to dark for the night
Sin is to lust and blood
My Favorite TEMPTATION
More Then The things I love
With No InSpIrAtIoN
Never stopped a feeling
these thaughts came out
sooo.......
APPEALING
Tp CHEAT is to lying

As
Breathing
Is 2
dying

I didnt feel the touch
...
On Second Thaught, I dont feel too Much
Too Much For One Man to handle
Light Up 669 Candles

I CANT
BREAK
TROUGH
YOUR HEART

But I can Tear It Apart

Give me My last breath
Thats all I have left
TRUST ME
Im known For Predicting My Own Death

GIVE AWAY My SHIT
Let Me Be Free
Like I said
Before the pain Is too Big in Me

So now As I lay Here
FUCK IT
Yes I did Cry

the Only reason I came back
Was to say
Good BYE!!!!!!!!!!

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On Monday November 13th, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

I think

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:

i out it out today the 7/30 hope you enjoy it!*669*

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:

i got a poem for you it's almost complete it will be out tommorrow.. 7/29/04 ....* i miss you to *

On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

great use of words great dedication peace

On Saturday June 5th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:

thank you for the Awesome poem..i'm humbled by this... I love this piece! every part of it especially the ending Mind Bottling Piece!

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

I miss 669

On Friday June 4th, 2004, _untouchable_ (72) writes:

this was so great. i loved it

On Friday June 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:

i really like the stylistic features here..very well written

On Friday June 4th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

wow, this was sooo way much better than my tribute to 669*. u're damn cool. i admit defeat...lols..u write so well! :) -MeL-

On Friday June 4th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

"I CANT BREAK TROUGH YOUR HEART But I can Tear It Apart"...fucking brilliant...to me that is the essence of this emotionally moving piece.very nice.-timchrist

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