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A cage has broken high above
freeing what seems a million paper doves.
They fold their wings into their chests,
tuck their beaks underneath; overlapping the rest


of their insufferable form.
Distinguished silently;
on gravestones blanketed nameless,
on statues made faceless


and every other thing below.
Like a mothers fingers on a childs bedtime lips;
hush, a mobile carnival of light playing a dim slideshow
and then the light slipping from the door


like the last light between coffin and sky.


A young girl belly down on the floor
colouring in a picture, with less to colour than before;
in front of a house disproportionate;
with all the peoples scribbled smiles forced and awkward,


lipstick out of line.
Eyes the same rushed blue anguish of the sky;
as though it all were broken, behind a composed mask
like someone mourning in a mirror,


trying to not hand over a tear
to a world that has already taken too much.
Mascara streaking down a pale face
like black chandeliers.


With wrists cut like thermometers split,
mercury unwilling to spill;
turning hard as does the skin
not ready for that final thrill.


I think someone from their window
must have been gazing at the sky;
hoping for his departed love
to offer some kind of reply
 

.. and the cage unlocked in that supposed air,
releasing all those mysterious sticky notes left everywhere.
Was now feeling less alone
watching all those mute couples in the street


in tiers and tiers of snow
like a wedding cake; except
the figurines are on the bottom layer
all hurrying to get indoors.





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On Friday September 19th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (740) writes:
Great imagery! I especially liked the way you used the images of the wedding cake figurines and the mercury...very creative and solid piece. Loved it! Ciao, T/S


On Thursday August 28th, 2008, sixsixnine (593) writes:
you sir are extremely talented. this piece really reflects the time we live in and the constant illusion that always seems to be so real. This bowl is to you


On Wednesday August 27th, 2008, Solace (1399) writes:
I was writing something long-winded to this, but I gave up, I just dive in circles like a plummeting bird to the pavement. I loved the first half the best, the second half was brilliant, but the first half felt like home,,,


On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, Narcissa (760) writes:
I always look forward to a new piece from you...you never fail to amaze my senses.


On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, TheProphetUntold (377) writes:
What really caught my fancy were the 3rd and 4th lines of the 6th stanza, and of course the concluding two stanzas. Some times I imagine your poetry as some beautifully fucked up snow globe, from which I cannot lift my gaze with out some sort of gross mundane distraction. I truly feel privileged to read and comment on the works you share. I don't know how many times I've said it to you alone, but I know that I don't say it often. Well written, and received. Another victorious poetic moment. Thank you. +tpu+


On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (760) writes:
Your images are always different, and yet all hold consistent characteristics; brilliance and beauty.



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