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I let my pain engulf me for a while
Closing my eyes I let it slowly, painfully, seep in
My life of strife, my disillusionment
I allow them to pierce my already bleeding heart

Tainted years of youth already lost
Innocence??? There’s nothing left
The memories haunt me. They’ve come to irk me
Ripping me apart, leaving my flesh bare, my ribcage dangling by the noose...

I arose from my slumber, unbury my head of tears
Walked across the mantelpiece to the mirror
My heart thumps hard against my chest as I stared hard into my likeness
The tears literally clear, leaving my iris stone cold, glazed over by a layer of frost

From then on I’m devoid of emotions…
I glared into the mirror; I like the new reflection I see
Slowly, a bittersweet smile touch my lips
Then I decided
               I – might – as – well – love – another – me





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On Monday December 11th, 2006, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
this is breathtaking!, i knowticed you havent written since 2005, hope you did not stop


On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Jay Jii (334) writes:
Great poem, aXe. Keep up the good work.


On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Zara Synn (76) writes:
This poem compells me to ponder the theory of M.P.D...or D.I.D. It was a wonderful display of your feelings...There was one part that confused me - the walking across the mantelpiece thing...Still, a good poem.


On Monday June 28th, 2004, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
If I had my own opinion , I would have to say that is pretty damn good .ds


On Friday June 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:
Very well written Psuedo_Me. There is much strength in this work, the revelation is powerful!! Keep writing! Cheers!!


On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, lollipoplips (110) writes:
this is awesome, and YOU are very talented, the descriptive words make the poem more visionary, I like it!~Lauren


On Monday May 31st, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
or just love yourself


On Friday May 28th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Awesome piece I will most certainly keep reading if you keep putting them up...


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (27) writes:
S-W-E-E-T...This is good...And so true, your words do not linger all and around, they move without stopping, crushing all defenses of this terrible world. Opera Ghost


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
I agree with gothmite, very beatifull write indeed. -fairy-


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
beautiful write, my dear


On Sunday May 23rd, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Devoid Of Emotions... Uh-Huh... I Like This One... Strange But True. GPhD.


On Sunday May 16th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:
I love this one! Instead of sitting and stewing in it...change into something you can live with and love yourself. Fantastic! Ciao, T/S


On Saturday May 15th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:
haha OMG this shit will now be on my favriots* 669 *


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Guttercat (35) writes:
The rhythm of this piece is rad, as is the imagery thus conjured. But another me is still me, ain't it? ;p Ah wellsk...


On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
actually tis poem is abt a person who suffered so much hurt frm so many ppl she loved tt sje has no faith in others anymore. but, well, she knew she can nvr disappoint herself & if there's another 1 of her, the "her" would surely love her back & nt hurt h


On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
her...thus, she might as well love another her...


On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Guttercat (35) writes:
Ahh... Thanks for enlightening me. =) *sigh* I always was too kinda slow at figuring good poems out. Loving oneself is important. =)


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:
Captivatingly beautiful . . I love this piece . .



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