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Vast Emptiness Now,
Nothing Exists, Nor Does Time;
Paradox Must End...
 
A Long Endless Line
Stretching Forever, Now Folds;
From First, To Second!
 
A Plane, Horizons,
Begin To Curl, Creating--
The Third Dimension!
 
Space, Which Has No Warmth,
Can't Exist... Without Some Time;
The Fourth, Now It Lives!
 
Space Twists On Itself,
Further Causing Change, And Now--
It Shatters, Big Bang!
 
Now Warmth And Substance;
How Will It All Coexist?
Something's Still Missing.
 
Attraction! That's it;
Quarks, Muons, Leptons, Protons...
Particles Form; Mix.
 
Nebulae, Stars Form--
Galaxies Transcend, To What?
To What Else? An Atom.
 
 
 
Universally,
We're all in this together;
Embrace Your Own Dream.




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On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:
Wow holy crap. To create one haiku and yet an entire piece wrapped around this formula. This was incredible. Very VERY well done. ~Ship!


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, manywalks (951) writes:
I'm jealous. I can't do haiku and make it make sense. Excellent. ~ mw


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, mysticventures (547) writes:
*claps hands* yes, very well done. As you can tell I love haiku :)


On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:
This form of poetry with structure makes writing (and reading) so much more interesting. Existenial questioning in its may be coolest form.. -S


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Derelict Dream (42) writes:
Thanks for commenting on this one, It seems to be my least liked work so far, but I will learn from it.....



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